Advanced Typography / Task 1 Exercises

 


23.8.2021 - 13.9.2021  (Week 1 - Week 4)
Lew Se Win / 0347637 / Bachelor of Design (Hons) in Creative Media
Advanced Typography
Task 1 / Exercises: Typographic System & Type & Play 


LECTURES 

Week 1
Mr. Vinod started this week's lecture by giving us a detailed briefing for this module. For this module, we are also required to watch pre-recorded lectures on YouTube. We are introduced to the typographic systems. 

Week 2
We are required to post our typographic system's progression on the post on the Facebook group and Mr. Vinod gave us feedback on our work. 

Week 3
Mr. Vinod gave us feedback on our typographic systems work. After that, Mr. Vinod briefed us on part 1 of the type & play task. Mr. Vinod then give us 30 minutes to search for images. 

Week 4
Mr. Vinod gave some of us feedback on our finding type exercise. After that, Mr. Vinod implemented the new feedback system, in which students are required to give each other feedback. After the feedback session, Mr. Vinod briefed us on part 2 of the type & play task. 

Pre-recorded lectures:

AdTypo_1_Typographic Systems

The typographic systems are akin to what architects term shape grammars (a set of shape rules that apply in a step-by-step way to generate a set). There are 8 major typographic systems. 

  • Axial: All elements are organized to the left or right of a single axis
  • Radial: All elements are extended from a point of focus (can be more than 1 point of focus)
  • Dilatational: All elements expand from a central point in a circular fashion
  • Random: Elements appear to have no specific pattern or relationship
  • Grid: A system of vertical and horizontal divisions
  • Transitional: An informal system of layered banding
  • Modular: A series of non-objective elements that are constructed in as a standardized units
  • Bilateral: All text is arranged symmetrically on a single axis 
AdTypo_2_Typographic Composition

Principles of Design Composition

We will think about the dominant principles but abstract nations seem ambiguous when it comes to translating it into typographic layout or composition. Emphasis/Symmetry can be easily translatable but repetition/perspective are not conducive in typographic composition.  

The Rule of Third

  • Photographic guide to composition
  • Frame (space) can be divided into 3 columns & 3 rows
  • Intersection of lines = guide to place the point of intersect


    Figure 5.0 Example for The Rule of Thirds, 2.9.2021
Typographic Systems
  • 8 systems
  • Most pragmatic/used = Grid system (Raster system)
  • Post-modernist era in Typographical system (choas, randomness, asymmetry) were explored because a group of younger designers began to question and challenge this notion of order
  • Legibility and readability were neglected 


    Figure 5.0.1 Designs in Post-Modernist Era, 2.9.2021
Environmental Grid 
  • Based on the exploration of an existing structure or numerous structures combined
  • An extraction of crucial lines (curved & straight) are formed
  • Organizes his information around this super-structure 
  • Include non-objective elements to create a unique & exciting mixture of texture and stimuli


    Figure 5.0.2 Example for Environmental Grid, 2.9.2021
Form and Movement
  • Based on the exploration of an existing grid system
  • To explore multitude of option that grid offer
  • To dispel the seriousness surrounding the application of grid system
  • To see the turning of pages in book as a slowed-down animation in the form that constitutes the placement of image. text and color
  • Placement of form (irrespective of what it is) on a page, over pages creates movement


    Figure 5.0.3 Example for Form and Movement, 2.9.2021


    Figure 5.0.4 Example for Form and Movement, 2.9.2021


    Figure 5.0.5 Example for Form and Movement, 2.9.2021
AdTypo_3_Context & Creativity

Handwriting

  • First mechanically produced letterforms
  • Basis/standard for form, spacing and conventions mechanical type would try and mimic
  • Evolution of the Latin Alphabet 


    Figure 6.0.1 Evolution of Latin Alphabet, 7.9.2021
Cuneiform
  • Earliest system of actual writing
  • Left to right
Hieroglyphics 
  • Egyptian writing system
  • Fused with the art of relief carving
  • Mixture of both rebus & phonetic characters
  • First link to feature alphabetic 
  • Potential to be used:
    - Ideograms - represent the things they actually depict
    - Determinatives - to show that the signs preceding are meant as phonograms and to indicate the general idea of the word
    - Phonograms - represent sound that "spell out" individual words
Early Greek
  • Egyptian logo-consonantal system
  • Phenetic alphabet (22 letters)
  • In rows but the direction of reading was not fixed
  • Can be left to right / right to left
  • Greek-boustrophedon / "as the ox plows"
  • Drawn free hand (not constructed with compasses & rule)
  • No serif
Roman Uncials
  • Letters were becoming more rounded
  • Curved form allowed for less stroke
English Half Uncials
  • More slanted and condensed form
Emperor Charlemagne
  • Diverse regional style
Carolingian Minuscule 
  • Book production increase
  • Language was standardized  (pronunciation, spelling, writing conventions)
Black Letter
  • Gothic: culminating artistic expression of the middle age
  • Tight spacing
  • Condensed lettering
  • Letter spacing reduced
The Italian Renaissance 
  • Through Italian art, architecture, literature and letter form design 
Movable Type
  • Diamond sutra: first printed illustration
  • Korean establish a foundry to last movable type in bronze (allowed the dismantling and resetting of text)
  • Introduction of moveable type: 1000-1100CE
Evolution of Middle Eastern Alphabet
  • Phoenician letter marcs a turning point in written language - use of sounds represented in letters - the script itself has been possibly influenced by the Egyptian Hieroglyphics and Hieratic scripts
Evolution of Chinese Script
  • From the oracle bone to seal script to clerical script, transitional and simplified script 
Indus Valley Civilization (IVC) Script
  • The oldest writing found in the 'Indian' subcontinent 
  • As yet undeciphered
  • Logo-syllabic in nature
Brahmi Script 
  • Earliest writing system develop in India after Indus script
  • Origin still much debated
    - at least influenced by on or more Semitic scripts
    - connection to much older as-yet undecided Indus Script of Indus Valley Civilization
Indian Script 
  • Oldest writing systems present in Southeast Asia
  • Pallava (basis for writing systems across Southeast Asia)
    - writing Sanskrit & Tamil 
  • Pra-nagari 
    - early form of the Nagari script, used in India for writing Sanskrit 
Kawi
  • Based on Nagari but indigenous to Jawa
  • Comes from the Sanskrit term Kavya (poet)
  • Script used for contact with other kingdoms
  • Basis of other script in Indonesia & Philippines 
Jawi 
  • Arabic-based alphabet
  • Introduced along Islam 
  • "We converted and adopted the Arabic alphabet"
  • Encourage teaching for the sake of proselytization  
All systems of writing have some form of influence. To claim complete originality is inaccurate and some would say ignorant. History give us context, but it also gives designers opportunity to design, research or help codify to communicate and understand better our collective heritage. 

AdTypo_4_Designing Type

Why design another typeface?

  • Type design carries a social responsibility so one must continue to improve its legibility 
  • Type design is a form of artistic expression
Adrian Frutiger
  • Renowned twentieth century swiss graphic designer 
  • Valued contribution includes the typefaces ; Univers and Frutiger
Frutiger
  • Sanserif typeface
  • For the newly built Charles de Gaulle International Airport in France
  • Called "rosy"
  • Purpose:
    - Create a clean distinctive and legible typeface that is easy to see (close up & far away)
    - Extremely functional 
  • Limitation:
    - Needed to be recognized even in poor light condition / when reader is moving quickly past the sign
    - Tested with unfocused letters to see which letter forms could still be identified 
  • Used by celcom / TM in Malaysia


    Figure 6.0.2 Frutiger, 7.9.2021
Matthew Carter
  • Son of Harry Carter
  • Royal Designer for Industry
  • Responsible for Crossfield's typographic program 
  • Created to address specific technical challenges
Verdana (Microsoft)
  • Purpose: 
    - Tuned to be extremely legible even at very small sizes on screen
  • Limitation:
    - The verdana fonts exhibit characteristics derived from the pixel rather than the pen, the brush or the chisel. Commonly confused characters i, j , and l

    Figure 6.0.3 Verdana, 7.9.2021 
Edward Johnson
  • Hugely influential London "Underground" typeface
Johnston Sans
  • "Bold simplicity"
  • Combined classical Roman proportion with humanist warmth
  • Purpose:
    - London Underground railway orders a new typeface for it posters and signage 
    - Handed over details and examples of letter space that would set the tone for printed text until the present day
  • Limitation: 
    - Unite London Underground Group
    - Applied the proportion of Roman capital letters to his typeface
    - An elegance & a simplicity that absolutely fitted the modern age
General Process of Type Design 
  1. Research 
    - Understand type history, type anatomy, and type conventions
    - Know terminologies, side-bearing, metric, hinting...
    - Determine the type purpose
    - Examine existing fonts
  2. Sketching
    - Traditional tool set: better control but uses more time
    - Digital tool set: quicker persistent & consistent but impede the natural movement of hand stroke
  3. Digitization 
    - Software: FontLab and Glyphs App
    - Attention should be given to the counter form
    - Readability of the typeface is heavily dependent on it
  4. Testing
    - Important component in the design process
    - Process of refining and correcting aspects of the typeface
    - Display text can be more expressive compared to readability and legibility 
  5. Deploy 
    - Task of revision doesn't end 
    - Rigors of testing is important 
Typeface Construction
  • Roman Capitals 
    - The grid consists of a square 
    - Inside it a circle that just touches the lines of the square in 4 places
    - Within the square, there is also rectangle (there quarters the size of the square)
    - Positioned in the center of the square
Construction and Considerations 
  • 26 characters of the alphabet can be arranged into group

    Figure 6.0.4 Grouping of alphabets, 7.9.2021
  • Visual correction is needed 
    - Extrusion of curved form past the baseline & cap line
    - Vertical alignment between curved and straight forms
  • Fitting
    - Letter must be altered to a uniform 'visual' shape with white space
    - White space between letters should appear the same
Most typefaces come about due to a need or demand 
  • Intrinsic 
    - Designer has an inexplicable need driven by interest design a typeface 
    - Seeks out a form that comes close fulfilling a desire
    - Identifies a gap / problem and thus endeavors to solve it through the design
  • Extinctic
    - Designers has been commissioned / student-designer has a task to complete that involved designing a typeface  
AdTypo_5_PerceptionAndOrganisation

Perception

  • "The way in which something is regarded, understood or interpreted."
  • Visual navigation and interpretation of the reader
  • Contrast, form & organization of content
  • Content: textual, visual, graphical, color
Contrast 
Figure 7.0 Several Methods in Typography to Create Contrast, 15.9.2021
  • Carl Dair adds a two more principles into mix; texture and direction
  • 7 kinds of contrast 
    - Size
    - Weight
    - Contrast of form
    - Contrast of structure
    - Contrast of texture 
    - Contrast of color
    - Contrast of direction
Contrast/Size
  • Provide a point to which the reader's attention is drawn
  • Making a title/heading noticeably bigger than the body text


    Figure 7.0.1 Example of Contrast/Size, 15.9.2021
Contrast/Weight
  • Bold type can stand out in the middle of higher type of same style
Contrast/Form
  • Distinction between
    - A capital letter and its lowercase equivalent 
    - A roman letter and its italic variant
    - Condensed and expanded versions of type form


    Figure 7.0.2 Example of Contrast/Form, 15.9.2021
Contrast/Structure
  • Different letterforms of different kinds of typefaces
  • Monoline san serif & a transitional serif
  • Italic and a black letter


    Figure 7.0.3 Example of Contrast/Structure, 15.9.2021
Contrast/Texture
  • By putting together the contrast of size, weight, for and structure, and applying them to a block of text on a page
  • The way the lines of type look as a whole up close and from a distance


    Figure 7.0.4 Example of Contrast/Texture, 15.9.2021

Contrast/Direction
  • Opposition between vertical and horizontal, and the angles in between
Contrast/Color
  • Suggest that a second color is often less emphasis in values than pain black on white
Form
  • Overall look and feel of the elements that make up typographic composition
  • Visual impact
  • First impression
  • Originating from Greek words "typo" (form) and "graphis" (writing)
  • Typography means to write in accordance with form 
  • Functions:
    - To represent a concept
    - To do so in a visual form
  • Provides a sense of letterforms' unique characteristics and abstract presentation
  • Interplay of meaning
  • Brings a balance harmony both in terms of function and expression
Organization/Gestalt
  • The way a thing has been "placed" or "put together"
  • The ability to acquire and maintain the meaning perceptions
  • Predict how perceptual grouping occurs together under a variety of circumstances (Wertheimer, 1923/1938)
  • The whole of anything is grater than its parts
The Law of Similarity
  • Gestalt grouping law (similar to each other)
  • Any number of features: color, orientation, size or indeed motion
The Law of Proximity
  • Gestalt group law (close together)
  • Items close to each other tend to be grouped together
The Law of Closure
  • The mind's tendency to see complete other objects or if part of the information needed to wake a complete picture in our minds is missing
The Law of Continuation
  • Human tend to perceive each of two or more objects as different, singular, and uninterrupted object even when they interest
The Law of Symmetry
  • Law of Praganz 


INSTRUCTIONS

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Week 1 & 2 - Typographic Systems

We are assigned to explore the 8 typographic systems using the content provided in MIB. We have to design at least 2 designs for each system. After that, we have to select one as our final design for each system. In class, we were given 1 hour to design with the axial system. 

Axial System

Figure 1.0 Axial (in class), 23.8.2021

Figure 1.1 Axial first outcome (in class), 23.8.2021

After getting feedback from Mr. Vinod, I decided to read the book provided by Mr. Vinod so that I can have a better understanding of every typographic system. 

Figure 1.1.1 Sketches, 24.8.2021

Figure 1.2 Axial #1 Progress, 25.8.2021

Figure 1.3 Axial #1 Outcome, 25.8.2021

Figure 1.4 Axial #2 Progress, 25.8.2021

For this second design, I tried to play with color at first. However, I realize that I make things harder and it is time-consuming. Due to limited time, I tried to make the design back to black and white so that I can see the arrangement of text clearly too. After the arrangement, I added colors to the text.

Figure 1.5 Axial #2 First Outcome, 25.8.2021

Figure 1.5.1 Axial #2 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

Radial System

Figure 1.6 Radial Print Screen, 26.8.2021

Figure 1.7 Radial #1 First Outcome, 26.8.2021

Figure 1.6.1 Radial #1 Print Screen, 29.8.2021

Figure 1.7.1 Radial #1 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

The poster below inspired my idea for Radial #2. While studying the meaning of Russian constructivism, I ran onto this poster.

Figure 1.8 Reference Poster, 26.8.2021

Figure 1.8 Radial #2 First Outcome, 26.8.2021

Figure 1.8.1 Radial #2 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

Figure 1.8.2 Radial #2 Third Outcome, 3.9.2021

Figure 1.8.3 Radial #3 Fourth Outcome, 3.9.2021

Dilatational System

Figure 1.9 Dilatational Progress, 26.8.2021

Figure 1.10 Dilatational #1 First Outcome, 26.8.2021

Figure 1.10.1 Dilatational #1 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

Figure 1.11 Dilatational #2 First Outcome, 26.8.2021

Figure 1.11.1 Dilatational #2 Second Outcome, 1.9.2021

Random System

Figure 2.0 Random #1 Progress, 27.8.2021

Figure 2.0 Random #1 Outcome, 27.8.2021

Figure 2.0.1 Random #1 Second Outcome, 1.9.2021

Figure 2.1 Random #2 Progress, 27.8.2021

Figure 2.2 Random #2 First Outcome, 27.8.2021

Figure 2.2.1 Random #2 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

Grid System

Figure 2.3 Grid #1 and #2 Print Screen Progress, 28.8.2021

Figure 2.4 Grid #1 Progress, 28.8.2021

Figure 2.5 Grid #1 First Outcome, 28.8.2021

Figure 2.5.1 Grid #1 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

Figure 2.6 Grid #2 Progress, 28.8.2021

Figure 2.7 Grid #2 First Outcome, 28.8.2021

Figure 2.7.1 Grid #2 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

I like the second outcome but I didn't realize that the spacing of letters is awkward before Mr. Vinod pointed out this. Hence, I tried to modify the idea so that the spacing can be more balanced. 

Figure 2.7.2 Grid #2 Third Outcome, 3.9.2021

Transitional System

Figure 2.8 Transitional #1 Progress, 28.8.2021

Figure 2.9 Transitional #1 First Outcome, 28.8.2021

Figure 2.9.1 Transitional #1 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

After I got the feedback from Mr. Vinod, I decided to modify the design and at the same time explore more possibilities. 

Figure 2.9.2 Mr. Vinod's Feedback, 30.8.2021

Figure 2.9.3 Transitional #1 Third Outcome, 1.9.2021

Figure 2.9.4 Transitional #1 Fourth Outcome, 3.9.2021

Figure 2.10 Transitional #2 Outcome, 28.8.2021

Modular System

Figure 3.0 Modular #1 Progress, 28.8.2021

Figure 3.1 Modular #1 First Outcome, 28.8.2021

Figure 3.1.1 Modular #1 Second Outcome Print Screen, 29.8.2021

Figure 3.1.2 Modular #1 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021


Figure 3.1.3 Modular #1 Third Outcome, 3.9.2021


Figure 3.2 Modular #2 Print Screen, 28.8.2021

Figure 3.3 Modular #2 First Outcome, 28.8.2021

Figure 3.3.1 Modular #2 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021


Figure 3.3.2 Modular #2 Third Outcome, 3.9.2021

Bilateral System

Figure 3.4 Bilateral #1 First Outcome, 28.8.2021

Figure 3.4.1 Bilateral #1 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

Figure 3.5 Bilateral #2 First Outcome, 28.8.2021

Figure 3.5.1 Bilateral #2 Second Outcome, 29.8.2021

Figure 3.5.2 Bilateral #2 Third Outcome, 3.9.2021

FINAL SUBMISSION

Figure 4.1 Final Axial System, 5.9.2021

Figure 4.2 Final Radial System, 5.9.2021

Figure 4.3 Final Dilatational System, 5.9.2021

Figure 4.4 Final Random System, 5.9.2021

Figure 4.5 Final Grid System, 5.9.2021

Figure 4.6 Final Transitional System, 5.9.2021

Figure 4.7 Final Modular System, 5.9.2021

Figure 4.8 Final Bilateral System, 5.9.2021

Figure 4.9 Final Task 1 Typographic Systems in PDF, 5.9.2021

Figure 4.9.1 Final Task 1 Typographic Systems with Grids and Guidelines, 5.9.2021

Week 3 - Type & Play Part 1 // Finding Type

We are assigned to select an image of man-made objects or structures and nature. Then, we have to analyze, dissect and identify 4 potential letterforms within the dissected image.

The images below are ones I found on Pinterest.

Figure 5.1 Neuron Web, 6.9.2021

Figure 5.1.1 Wings, 6.9.2021

Figure 5.1.2 Honeycomb, 6.9.2021

After that, I decided to trace the letterforms on the 3 images before deciding which images to use.  

Figure 5.2 Identified Letterforms on Neuron Web, 7.9.2021
Figure 5.2.1 Identified Letterforms on Wings, 7.9.2021
Figure 5.2.2 Identified Letterforms on Honeycomb, 7.9.2021

Later on, I decided to choose the letterforms identified from neuron web. 

Figure 5.3 Extracted Letterforms from Neuron Web, 7.9.2021

Figure 5.3.1 Chosen Letterforms, 7.9.2021

I decided to use the Gabriola typeface as my reference typeface.

Figure 5.3.2 Gabriola as Reference, 8.9.2021

Figure 5.3.2 First Refinement of Letterforms, 8.9.2021

I think that it is hard to standardize the shaky strokes. Hence, I decided to refine it to a smooth outline stroke first. 

Figure 5.3.2 Second Refinement of Letterforms, 9.9.2021

This time, I refined the swash and stem of the letterforms.

Figure 5.3.3 Comparison of Third and Fourth Refinement of Letterforms, 10.9.2021

Figure 5.3.4 Refinement Progress (Standardizing the stroke width), 10.9.2021

After that, I move the letterforms into separated artboards to make sure that the height and width of the letterforms are in the correct proportion. 

Figure 5.4 Comparing each Letterform with Gabriola's Letterform, 11.9.2021 

Refining the terminal of every letterform. 

Figure 5.5 Finding Type Fist Outcome, 12.9.2021

Later on, I think of adding back the shaky effect to the letterforms. 

Figure 5.6 Finding Type Second Outcome, 13.9.2021

Figure 5.6.1 Compilation of Progress, 13.9.2021

Week 4 - Type & Play Part 1 // Finding Type

After receiving feedback from classmates and Mr. Vinod, I decided to rework on my letterforms. I got stuck in this step. Hence, I decided to sketch out some of my ideas. 

Figure 5.7.0 Sketches, 13.9.2021

Figure 5.7.1 Sketches, 13.9.2021

Figure 5.8 Progress, 13.9.2021

Later on, I noticed that my reference typeface was still influencing me too much. As a result, I decided to restart the process from beginning using my extracted letterforms.

Figure 6.1 Extracted letterforms, 14.9.2021

In the first refinement progress, I decided to remove the extended cross bar for letter A and H.

Figure 6.2.0 First Refinement Progress, 14.9.2021

Later on, I decided to straighten the strokes of the letterforms.

Figure 6.2.2 Second Refinement Progress, 14.9.2021

In the previous step, I added swash to letterform A. However, I realized that the swash is not working. Hence, I decided to remove it and did some refinement of cross bar in this step. 

Figure 6.2.3 Third Refinement Progress, 14.9.2021

For the fourth refinement step, I attempt to standardize the strokes of the letterforms. 

Figure 6.2.4 Fourth Refinement Progress, 14.9.2021

Following that, I refined the part where the stem connects with another stem. 

Figure 6.2.5 Fifth Refinement Progress, 14.9.2021

Figure 6.2.6 Sixth Refinement Progress, 18.9.2021

Figure 6.3 Finding Type Third Outcome, 19.9.2021

Figure 6.4 Compilation of Progress, 19.9.2021

FINAL SUBMISSION

Figure 6.5.0 Final Finding Type Outcome, 18.9.2021

Figure 6.5.1 Final A, 18.9.2021

Figure 6.5.2 Final Y, 18.9.2021

Figure 6.5.3 Final H, 18.9.2021

Figure 6.5.4 Final P, 18.9.2021

Figure 6.6 Final Type & Play Part 1 Finding Type in PDF, 19.9.2021
Week 4 - Type & Play Part 2 // Type & Image

We are assigned to combine a visual with a letter/word/sentence. With that, I decided to scroll through Pinterest to find the image that I wanted to use for this task. 

Figure 7.1.0 Images from Pinterest, 14.9.2021

I decided to use the image below, and I chose the phrase "music speaks" to combine with it.

Figure 7.1.1 Chosen Image from Pinterest, 16.9.2021

Figure 7.2.0 First Attempt, 16.9.2021

I experimented with different word perspectives.

Figure 7.2.1 Second Attempt, 16.9.2021

Figure 7.2.2 Third Attempt, 16.9.2021

Figure 7.2.3 Fourth Attempt, 16.9.2021

Figure 7.2.4 Final Design #1 Outcome, 16.9.2021

Later on, I have an idea of changing the words to the sentence "Flowers are the music of the Earth".

Figure 7.3.1 Design #2 First Attempt, 19.9.2021

Figure 7.3.2 Design #2 Second Attempt, 19.9.2021

Figure 7.3.3 Design #2 Third Attempt, 19.9.2021

To balance out the text, I decide to change the word "earth" to "ground" because it is longer.

Figure 7.3.4 Design #2 Fourth Attempt, 20.9.2021

Figure 7.3.5 Final Design #2, 20.9.2021

I came across this ballet image while scrolling through Pinterest. Then I get the bright idea of including the text "feel it" along with the image. Hence, I came out with the third artwork. 

Figure 7.4.0 Image from Pinterest, 16.9.2021

Figure 7.4.1 Design #3 First Attempt, 20.9.2021

Figure 7.4.2 Final Design #3 Outcome, 20.9.2021

FINAL SUBMISSION

Figure 7.5 Final Type & Play Part 2 Type and Image, 20.9.2021

Figure 7.5 Final Type & Play Part 2 Type and Image in PDF, 20.9.2021


TIME SPENT

Task 1/Exercises
Typographic Systems: 35 hours
Finding Type: 25 hours
Type & Image: 12 hours

FEEDBACK

Week 1
Specific Feedback:
The headline is too long.

General Feedback: 
Start with all information being of the same point size and then arrange it. Based on the arrangement, determine what to stand out. Besides, we should give a little bit more letter spacing to capital letters. We should avoid 45 degree diagonal. We have to make sure that non-objective elements and the spacing of the text is equal. 

Week 2
Specific Feedback:
Mr. Vinod said that I did a great job in the dilatational system's design (Figure 1.11), but the small caps of L and T are not needed because too many things happen there. He likes the filled and the outline concept (Yin and Yang) there. The radial, axial and bilateral system (Figure 1.8.1, Figure 1.3, Figure 3.5.1) is ok. For the random system (Figure 2.0), Mr. Vinod said that I can further create more randomness in the placement and treatment of my work. For the grid system (Figure 2.7.1), Mr. Vinod said that the letter spacing is part of the design style that is used in the '80s. It is fine if I want to use it but sometimes the contrast can make people feel uneasy on it (letter-spacing may be a little awkward). Mr. Vinod also said that he like the bottom part of my transitional system's design (Figure 2.9.1). For the vertical part, it should be going down to the bottom, continue at the right, and leave the top part empty. For the modular system (Figure 3.1.2), Mr. Vinod suggested that I can move the "&" to the right. He also said that it is an interesting solution for the grouping of name and time (a bit of a jump but still acceptable). 

General Feedback: 
Mr. Vinod reminded us to make sure that information in the axial system is aligned to the axis. The placement of information is most important, so try to use lesser non-objective elements. If the typeface does not have small caps, we can reduce the point size by 0.5pt. Besides, random systems should not be too structured. Be aware of the letter spacing and kerning. Lastly, we have to have our own analysis so that we can be less dependent on Mr. Vinod's feedback. 

Week 3
Specific Feedback:
The radial system and radial system are ok. The dilatational system is well balanced. For the transitional system, Mr. Vinod said that the use of black and red patches is good. For the bilateral system, Mr. Vinod said that it is a bit tricky to typeset upper case letters (need to have a little bit of letter spacing and leading). The random system is almost there but the words "Russian" and "constructivism" are blocking the utilized background. The placement is breaking the rhythm of the overall thing in the background. The random system design (Figure 2.0.1) is attracting people towards it especially the letter "O". 

General Feedback:
The final submission for the typographic system exercise is next week. Make sure that all files are documented clearly on our blog.  

Week 4
Specific Feedback:
Mr. Vinod said that the section that a stem that connects another stem looks a little bigger from my extracted letterforms but in my process, I lose that core feature of the letterform. Besides, I made a drastic change on the second refinement. I have to be careful about it because the jump makes me lost seeing the core features. I got too influenced by my reference typeface. I have to reintroduce the section to my existing work. Senta said that she likes the end of the typeface when it progressed. The end looks very different from the extracted typeface because the final letterform looks shaper. Ellis said that the end of extracted letterforms are thicker but in my final letterform it tapers. The curve stroke and crossbar is not consistent. I should also put the guidelines to show the baseline. Mr Vinod also commented "Brilliant documentation of process and indepth work ethic! You are an excellent learner. Well done and KEEP IT UP!"

General Feedback:
Make sure that the strokes are consistent in style and weight. Besides, we have to have critical thinking to analyze feedback on other classmate's work. 

Week 5
General Feedback:
The decision-making for the artwork will reflect depending on the working time. Many designs are iterated. The text must be integrated with the image.

REFLECTION

Experience: 
This module starts with a tiring week. I can feel the heaviness of this module after the first class. I really struggled in week 1's exercise and I was not satisfied with all the outcomes. However, I still have to deal with the deadline and I tried my best to complete them. In week 2, we are given one more week to complete the first exercise. Hence, I attempted to enhance my designs in response to Mr. Vinod's suggestions. Week 4 is a very hectic week for me because I need to make major changes to my finding type task and then move on to the type and image task. However, I enjoy doing all of the exercises, and they have helped me get back on track after a long semester break. I believe that the exercises will be extremely beneficial to me in the upcoming tasks.

Observations:
I've observed that typography seems to have a lot more possibilities, and I'm excited to learn more about them. I also noticed that some of my classmates' work had excellent kerning and tracking. In the first week, I didn't pay attention to little details like kerning and tracking letters. After that, I attempted to resolve the issues from week 2. I also observed that I will be easily influenced by references. In addition, I've noticed that shadows are important when working with text and images.

Findings:
I found out that I had a hard time designing on the random typographic system compared to other more "systemic" systems. I found out that the trial and error method is better for me compared to sketching out the arrangements. Hence, I might use more time to complete the task. For Task 2, I found out that the refinement progress must be very detailed. Small changes can drastically alter the appearance of the typefaces. After reviewing my classmates' work, I discovered that there are numerous ways to combine type and image, and that many of these methods can result in strong hierarchy or provocative artwork.

FURTHER READING

Figure 1.0.1 Typographic Systems by Kimberly Elam, 24.8.2021

This book explained the 8 major variations with an infinite variety of compositions within each typographic system. I have deeper knowledge of every system after reading this book. This book also showed the process-oriented exploration of the systems.


Figure 1.0.2 Typography Essentials Revised and Updated :100 Design Principles for Working with Type, 9.9.2021

I read the chapter of 'The Word' from this book. Typographic hierarchy can be created using position, weight, color, size, contrast, orientation, and special effects. Besides, I found out that the sub-topic of 'Type as Image' is interesting. I agree with the sentence written by the author that says "One of the joys of working with letterforms is their uncanny ability to be shaped into images".

Figure 1.0.3 The Fundamentals of Typography, 16.9.2021

I read chapter 5 of this book. This chapter covered a variety of subtopics, including the use of type, hierarchy, color, and so on. I was impressed by some of the cool examples of type expression provided. Color palette refinement and controlled, restrained typography will create a sense of order.
















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